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Dang! Trotter Banned From Amazon
Posts : 2589 Join date : 2009-05-06 Location : Between a rock and hard place
| Subject: The Coast comic no. 1 Mon 15 Feb 2010, 2:41 am | |
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Dang! Trotter Banned From Amazon
Posts : 2589 Join date : 2009-05-06 Location : Between a rock and hard place
| Subject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1 Mon 15 Feb 2010, 2:45 am | |
| I kind of left too much empty space after the first 3 panels but its my first (notmy first comic). I tried to fit in one page. This is just an intro, they'll get better.Leave a comment and be honest. | |
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Shaun I'm Ghetto Platinum
Posts : 10096 Join date : 2009-05-06 Age : 33 Location : Eardrum>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Quality
| Subject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1 Mon 15 Feb 2010, 3:01 am | |
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parker lewis E-4000, Ya Smell Me?
Posts : 4876 Join date : 2009-05-31
| Subject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1 Mon 15 Feb 2010, 7:11 am | |
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| Subject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1 Mon 15 Feb 2010, 4:00 pm | |
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Dwight It Takes A Nation of 1000s?
Posts : 1274 Join date : 2009-05-07 Location : Illinois
| Subject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1 Mon 15 Feb 2010, 4:13 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1 Thu 18 Feb 2010, 4:17 pm | |
| Lovin it man....this could get big. Cartoon series? Figures? Webcast? |
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Alan Smokes More Trees Than The Slash And Burn Technique
Posts : 5364 Join date : 2009-06-11 Age : 42 Location : Minneapolis, MN
| Subject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1 Thu 18 Feb 2010, 8:17 pm | |
| Nice! I dig it. The only room for improvement IMO is the dialogue and making it flow easily. Not bad at all though. Nice work! | |
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Norfeest What's NXET?
Posts : 2871 Join date : 2009-05-07 Age : 47 Location : DMV
| Subject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1 Fri 19 Feb 2010, 2:31 am | |
| Yeah, dialogue is choppy, but dope shit overall. Keep up the good work, man... | |
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T. Myers One Of A Kind
Posts : 10879 Join date : 2009-05-06 Age : 42
| Subject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1 Fri 19 Feb 2010, 8:52 am | |
| I'm digging this. Good job Trotter. | |
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Dang! Trotter Banned From Amazon
Posts : 2589 Join date : 2009-05-06 Location : Between a rock and hard place
| Subject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1 Fri 19 Feb 2010, 4:38 pm | |
| - Kopasetick wrote:
- Yeah, dialogue is choppy, but dope shit overall. Keep up the good work, man...
Yeah, I'm not the best writer. But I did rush through this one in order to upload it by the time I said. My computer was acting ill. Some reason I can't access this site from my home computer and my laptop is more powerful. So I was rushing it cause I didn't know how long my laptop will be in the shop. But my laptop is fixed. Programs re-installed. Ready to roll | |
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Z-membu Hi, My Name Is!
Posts : 717 Join date : 2009-08-02 Age : 54 Location : Maputo, Mozambique
| Subject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1 Wed 03 Mar 2010, 10:30 pm | |
| Great job. I like that Bam character. Much props! | |
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