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PostSubject: The Coast comic no. 1   The Coast comic no. 1 Icon_minitimeMon 15 Feb 2010, 2:41 am

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PostSubject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1   The Coast comic no. 1 Icon_minitimeMon 15 Feb 2010, 2:45 am

I kind of left too much empty space after the first 3 panels but its my first (notmy first comic). I tried to fit in one page. This is just an intro, they'll get better.Leave a comment and be honest.
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PostSubject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1   The Coast comic no. 1 Icon_minitimeMon 15 Feb 2010, 3:01 am

Haha, that's dope.
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PostSubject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1   The Coast comic no. 1 Icon_minitimeMon 15 Feb 2010, 7:11 am

Nice, man
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PostSubject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1   The Coast comic no. 1 Icon_minitimeMon 15 Feb 2010, 4:00 pm

Good job.
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PostSubject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1   The Coast comic no. 1 Icon_minitimeMon 15 Feb 2010, 4:13 pm

Nicely done Trotter.
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PostSubject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1   The Coast comic no. 1 Icon_minitimeThu 18 Feb 2010, 4:17 pm

Lovin it man....this could get big. Cartoon series? Figures? Webcast?
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PostSubject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1   The Coast comic no. 1 Icon_minitimeThu 18 Feb 2010, 8:17 pm

Nice! I dig it. The only room for improvement IMO is the dialogue and making it flow easily. Not bad at all though. Nice work!
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PostSubject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1   The Coast comic no. 1 Icon_minitimeFri 19 Feb 2010, 2:31 am

Yeah, dialogue is choppy, but dope shit overall. Keep up the good work, man...
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PostSubject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1   The Coast comic no. 1 Icon_minitimeFri 19 Feb 2010, 8:52 am

I'm digging this. Good job Trotter.
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PostSubject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1   The Coast comic no. 1 Icon_minitimeFri 19 Feb 2010, 4:38 pm

Kopasetick wrote:
Yeah, dialogue is choppy, but dope shit overall. Keep up the good work, man...

Yeah, I'm not the best writer. But I did rush through this one in order to upload it by the time I said. My computer was acting ill. Some reason I can't access this site from my home computer and my laptop is more powerful. So I was rushing it cause I didn't know how long my laptop will be in the shop. But my laptop is fixed. Programs re-installed. Ready to roll
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PostSubject: Re: The Coast comic no. 1   The Coast comic no. 1 Icon_minitimeWed 03 Mar 2010, 10:30 pm

Great job. I like that Bam character. Much props!
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