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Dang! Trotter
Banned From Amazon
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Location : Between a rock and hard place
|  Subject: Comic no.2  Mon 22 Feb 2010, 6:56 am | |
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Dang! Trotter
Banned From Amazon
Posts : 2589
Join date : 2009-05-06
Location : Between a rock and hard place
| | Subject: Re: Comic no.2 Mon 22 Feb 2010, 6:59 am | |
| Another installment of the greatest comic in America. I took heed to my criticism of choppy dialogue.
I may have put too much dialogue in this one. Its getting better considering my other comic universes took me years to build. This is still new and I'm working with a deadline! | |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: Comic no.2 Mon 22 Feb 2010, 11:02 am | |
| Dopeness, can't wait for new ones!! |
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| | Subject: Re: Comic no.2 Mon 22 Feb 2010, 1:37 pm | |
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Half
Paragraphs Relentless
Posts : 6865
Join date : 2009-06-12
Age : 247
Location : A Clean, Well-Lighted Place
| | Subject: Re: Comic no.2 Mon 22 Feb 2010, 6:20 pm | |
| Great, and a definite improvement. Keep up the good work man. | |
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Alan
Smokes More Trees Than The Slash And Burn Technique
Posts : 5364
Join date : 2009-06-11
Age : 42
Location : Minneapolis, MN
| | Subject: Re: Comic no.2 Mon 22 Feb 2010, 9:49 pm | |
| LOL! A nice improvement from the first one Trotter. I like it! | |
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Justin Linker
Smells Like Roses...
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Join date : 2009-05-06
Age : 128
Location : Midland, NC USA
| | Subject: Re: Comic no.2 Wed 24 Feb 2010, 2:07 am | |
| All the beats are uploaded for this week's beat battle - GO VOTE FOR THE WINNER! | |
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Norfeest
What's NXET?
Posts : 2871
Join date : 2009-05-07
Age : 47
Location : DMV
| | Subject: Re: Comic no.2 Wed 24 Feb 2010, 2:40 am | |
| - Dang! Trotter wrote:
- Another installment of the greatest comic in America. I took heed to my criticism of choppy dialogue.
I may have put too much dialogue in this one. Its getting better considering my other comic universes took me years to build. This is still new and I'm working with a deadline! Rome wasn't built in a day. Good shit, bro. Keep up the good work... lol @ eel-matic | |
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Z-membu
Hi, My Name Is!
Posts : 717
Join date : 2009-08-02
Age : 54
Location : Maputo, Mozambique
| | Subject: Re: Comic no.2 Wed 03 Mar 2010, 11:07 pm | |
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MURDERGHOST
Hi, My Name Is!
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Join date : 2011-08-09
Age : 46
Location : Southern California
| | Subject: Re: Comic no.2 Sun 21 Aug 2011, 8:36 pm | |
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