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PostSubject: Wanduras - Life of Ours (Instrumental)   Thu 30 Dec 2010, 11:40 pm

Whats happenin fellas, here's my latest beat. Feedback is appreciated. Thanks for listening.

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PostSubject: Re: Wanduras - Life of Ours (Instrumental)   Fri 31 Dec 2010, 12:33 pm

Yo Wanduras, this is some dope ish bro... I'm really feeling the melody and the hi hats are on point. The only thing I would tweak is the intro, I would have the melody creep in at 5 or 6 secs, but either way ish is dope... Where's the lyrics?

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PostSubject: Re: Wanduras - Life of Ours (Instrumental)   Fri 31 Dec 2010, 12:43 pm

Thanks Arok. You're not the first one that said that about the intro, I will tweak it when I get the chance. And this one is hot off the press so I haven't written anything to it yet but it's coming. I already have a chorus in mind.
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PostSubject: Re: Wanduras - Life of Ours (Instrumental)   Tue 04 Jan 2011, 1:07 pm

Maybe too electronic sounding for my taste, but it's not bad. Many others would enjoy this more I think. That electric guitar(?) that comes in at 11 sec, imo is few dB's too loud.
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PostSubject: Re: Wanduras - Life of Ours (Instrumental)   Sat 08 Jan 2011, 12:55 am

Not bad at all Wanduras, I would say this would have to be my fav. beat from you...Its clean man nice stuff, I love the arrangement and the instruments, I do think that some of them could be a lil lower or softer to give a more chill vibe to it, but otherwise, gr8 stuff keep it up
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PostSubject: Re: Wanduras - Life of Ours (Instrumental)   Sat 08 Jan 2011, 4:34 pm

Thanks for the feedback guys. I am in the process of reworking the levels and shit now.
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PostSubject: Re: Wanduras - Life of Ours (Instrumental)   Mon 24 Jan 2011, 4:55 pm

it needs to be smoother. it sounds choppy. lots of potential
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