The Cypher (fixed)

I had to redo this one. It was my first recording, and I HATED MY VOICE. The beat I chose was meh, so I got a different one, and I have gained more confidence on the mic. Check it out.

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Its nice. But is it suppose to be poetry or a full fledge rap song? Your wordplay is nasty

This sounds much better than the last time (not to say that the other one wasn't dope). It does seem like you've become more comfortable when speaking, and the beat behind this is great. Good stuff, once again

Dang! Trotter wrote:

Its nice. But is it suppose to be poetry or a full fledge rap song? Your wordplay is nasty

I was going for poetry, but I've been told that my poetry borderlines on rapping. I've tried rapping fully, but hooks really aren't my thing, and to be honest....I kinda suck at rapping. I did make a track where I was trying to rap. It has a hook and everything. I'll have to put it up sometime, but the content is based on a very intimate time in my life. I also have another one that describes the whole pedestrian vs vehicle incident I was involved in back in 2002, but I don't think that one is ready for the public ear yet.

And thanks for the compliment Trotter.