Wanduras - Life of Ours (Instrumental)

Whats happenin fellas, here's my latest beat. Feedback is appreciated. Thanks for listening.

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Yo Wanduras, this is some dope ish bro... I'm really feeling the melody and the hi hats are on point. The only thing I would tweak is the intro, I would have the melody creep in at 5 or 6 secs, but either way ish is dope... Where's the lyrics?

Peace

Thanks Arok. You're not the first one that said that about the intro, I will tweak it when I get the chance. And this one is hot off the press so I haven't written anything to it yet but it's coming. I already have a chorus in mind.

Maybe too electronic sounding for my taste, but it's not bad. Many others would enjoy this more I think. That electric guitar(?) that comes in at 11 sec, imo is few dB's too loud.

Not bad at all Wanduras, I would say this would have to be my fav. beat from you...Its clean man nice stuff, I love the arrangement and the instruments, I do think that some of them could be a lil lower or softer to give a more chill vibe to it, but otherwise, gr8 stuff keep it up

Thanks for the feedback guys. I am in the process of reworking the levels and shit now.

it needs to be smoother. it sounds choppy. lots of potential