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2nd verse is me. Havent been in da studio for a while so it was rushed plus i'm still learning anyway. turned out better than I thought though

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The lyrics are interesting, a little vulgar at points, but the concept is interesting man...The flow needs to be a lil smoother cuz at points it sounds choppy. You have a nice presence and energy and dubs are decent. Just work on your rhyme scheme... also whoever went second got flow, although his lyrics again were way too vulgar but thats preference...Overall not bad, altho not really my type of muzik.

I co-sign Livenlearn's feedback on the lyrics... The beat was different, but it seem to work for your concept. As for the Mc presence, like you said you are still learning, but I def feel that you stuck out the most out of the three Mc's. Keep it man...

Peace

Personally, I don't mind the vulgarity but I would agree that the edges need a little smoothing. I though it was overall pretty dope, though. I love the concept, too. I'm not sure who is who but one of the guys reminds me of that Three 6 flow a little, which I like a lot.

thanks homies. Hook ya boi up with a beat I can record at my friends house and I'll show ya'll that this aint shit. we got this whole track done (lyrics n all) in less than 2 hours. gimme some grimy shit!!

1st is fastaro 2nd is me (AK) 3rd is paragon 4th is dj gringo

Part of the problem here is the drums kind of plod along and when you have choppy clows they clash really bad. It's just something to be aware of, because when you're still working the kinks out you should be aware of covering flaws. Another thing to be cognisant of is to put your best mc first, because when people hear your tracks and the hear a guy that sounds nervous right off the bat, either they'll turn the song off or kind of drown the rest out.

I like this style of rap so none of the subject matter bothers me in the least. I would say the lyrics are pretty good but the flows need some work. I liked the general idea of the beat but the drums just didn't work as well as they could have.

Definitely some dope stuff in there, and don't think I'm trying to hate. You guys clearly have some potential but maybe take the time to record a few more vocal takes and smooth things out.