Posts : 1774 Join date : 2010-07-31 Age : 41 Location : Palm Bay, FLA : Home of the Bomb Hay
Subject: The Produce - Welcome To The Weekend Wed 11 May 2011, 9:43 pm
What's up fellas, here is the intro and title track to our album. Please leave some feedback, it is much appreciated! And yes, that is a typewriter at the very beginning...apparently our album takes place in the 70s...lol...it will be changed.
1st Verse and Chorus - L.E.B. 2nd Verse - Emjay 3rd Verse - Wanduras Produced by - L.E.B.
Posts : 2445 Join date : 2011-03-01 Age : 41 Location : Bunnyhead, Texas
Subject: Re: The Produce - Welcome To The Weekend Wed 11 May 2011, 10:06 pm
Really dug the beat, hook and your verse... just not in love with Emjay and LEB as much on the mic
Wanduras Curren$y Stan
Posts : 1774 Join date : 2010-07-31 Age : 41 Location : Palm Bay, FLA : Home of the Bomb Hay
Subject: Re: The Produce - Welcome To The Weekend Wed 11 May 2011, 11:31 pm
It's all good, I appreciate the feedback man. I know I can kill em on the mic anyway, lol. I think Emjay's verses could sound a lot doper if we fixed his delivery. If you listen to the lyrics his shit is fuckin nice. He's good with the metaphors and all that. When we re-record this shit we are gonna clean it up.
SyRuP Sippa What's NXET?
Posts : 2445 Join date : 2011-03-01 Age : 41 Location : Bunnyhead, Texas
Subject: Re: The Produce - Welcome To The Weekend Wed 11 May 2011, 11:35 pm
Oh yeah, I meant just delivery wise... lyrically there's nothing wrong with either guy... but delivery could use work. I do dig the track a lot though...let it play 3 times the first time...
arokone Jazz Fiend
Posts : 596 Join date : 2009-05-06 Age : 51 Location : Chicago
Subject: Re: The Produce - Welcome To The Weekend Sat 28 May 2011, 8:22 am